[刘晓燕]作文笔记

第一节概述
一、写作概述
大作文：
图画、图表
18行，用时25min
小作文：
应用文：私人书信、公务书信、告示。
10行左右，包含落款等
做题时间顺序及分配：
1.写作40min 2.阅读90min 3.新题型英语二10min,英语一15min 4.翻译20min 5.完形15min
建议不要检查纠结。
二、评分原则和方法
语言第一
原则一:书写工整，卷面整洁，字迹清晰
原则二:语言第一:单词（背单词）语法正确、准确多遍
离考前3个月都来的及
结构第二:
1）总分总
2）写作中只要上下句有逻辑关系，必须用逻辑关系词，代词代替名词
内容第三:
内容一点也不重要
三、考研中相关问题
1.语域问题
a 缩写词不正式
b 泛指的不定代词you，在正式文体中写成one
you never know what measures the president will take.
c 正式问题的引导词that不可省略
d 插入语使句子更正式
第二节 写作满分表达和练习
一） 简单句
我们应该孝敬父母
We should respect our parents.

1. 被动
   我们，我，你们等人称代词做主语可换被动
   Parents should be respect by us.
   父母长辈可替换：
   Parents
   Superiors
   The elderly
   Senior citizens
   应该
   Should
   Ought to
   Be supposed to
   Be obllged to
   Us替换
   We us peope:
   Human beings
   Private individuals
   The folks masses
   孩子
   children
   kids
   descendant
   年轻人
   Youngsters and teenagers
   Youngsters on campus
   Undergraduates
   专家教授
   Experts and professors
   All children and adults
   Men and women in all walks
   各行各业的男男女女们
   Customers
   我们不应该盲目追星
   Superstars ought not to be pursued blindly by teenagers and youngsters.
   Not
   Never
   By no means
   Under no circumstances
   Fail to
   污染很严重
   The pollution is very serious.
   升级：
   Pollution is thought very serious by an increasing number of experts and professors.
   Think替换
   Hold argue
   contend assume presume
   insist maintain assert claim
   认为
   be of the opinion that
   have been convinced that
   cling to the perspective that
   非常very替换
   Pretty；quite；more than
   本句型推荐第一段最后一句话，引出文章中心！或者第三段第一句话，文章总结使用。
   二） 并列句
   三） 复合句
   四） 英语的特殊结构
   Idea替换
   Point viewpoint
   Outlook
   Perspective
   Argument

There is strong evidence to show that…
有确凿的证据表明
There is a growing worldwide awareness around the world that…
=more and more people think that…

2比较结构
1） As…as…作文出现adj or adv都可考虑as…as…句型，推荐第一段最后一句，引出文章中心，或者第三段文章总结使用。
Liu is very beautiful
Liu is as beautiful as a white lily,which manages to (catch the eyes抓住眼睛) of a host of teenagers and youngsters.

Be动词替换，
look、smell、taste、feel sound、
seem、appear、prove.
Become get
Keep remain

Beautiful替换
Attractive;granceful;charming;elegant;gorgeous

自信很重要
Confidence keeps as important as air and water.
Which plays a key role in the normal growth of all creatures in the world.